Script is done! May make a few edits after this post but it's basically done. I had my friends Ale and Gabi read through it and give notes and they liked it so that's good. The only notes I got was that the exposition dump was very exposition dump-y, but given the time constraints I really couldn't do too much about that. The script is long, I know that, but it isn't reflective of the film's actual time limit. A lot of the script is devoted to descriptions and feelings of scenes that I want to make sure to capture. Also adding a space in-between each line gave me an extra two pages haha. I am and will be doing my damndest (is that a word?) to make sure the film is five minutes. Honestly I don't want it to exceed at all, I think the piece works and flows much better if its short and conforms to the five minute rule. Doing more would make it much more convulated than it needs to be and I don't want that at all.
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